DOUBLE PAGE SPREAD 3RD DRAFT

I have changed all the text on the double page spread to make it easier for my audience to read. I changed the title to make it match the artists colourings and font. I then added a page number so the auidence know what page it is. 

CONTENTS PAGE 4TH DRAFT

I have changed the text of the title to make it stand out more instead of the white against the pale colours. I've also matched the colourings and font to the title of the magazine to keep the house style throughout the magazine. 

Dolby

This is much better, now you need to try and work on the contents and dps and upload some more drafts of these.

FRONT COVER 5TH DRAFT

I have added more headlines onto the front cover to make it look more like a magazine. I've also changed the font of the artists name and colour, to make it easier to read and stand out. 

FRONT COVER 4TH DRAFT

I have changed the font and made it larger so it's easier for the audience to read. I have also added a pug to make it look more like a magazine. I feel these work better than the other drafts due to their unclearness and no pugs. 

PROGRESS

Today i designed a survey on survey monkey to get audience feedback on my magazine. The results will be able to help me change my magazine in any places where my audience feel they don't like. It will also show me things i will not need to change. 

I also changed some things on my magazine such as spelling mistakes and unclear font. 

DRAFT 3 OF MAGAZINE

I have changed the coverlines with the artists's name to make sure the artists names do not look like the title of the magazine. I have also made the font bigger so it's easier to read. I also made the title of the maazine bigger to make it stand out against the rest of the magazine. 

I am going to change my contents page picture due to the fact that contents pages are meant to be easy to read and the picture may influence this,

I changed the contents page image to this one, so it is subtle and easier to read for the audience.

I then swapped the images from the double page spread and contents page.

DRAFT 2 OF MAGAZINE

I have changed the font e,g, the colouring and boldness to make it easier for the audience to read. I have also added text around my front cover to make it seem more like a magazine. I changed the price of the magazine from £3.99 to £2.99 due to the amount of pages i have, so it is more realistic and the audience will afford it. I made reverse slightly smaller so the audience does not mistake it as the title of the magazine. I may need to swap the positioning of the title and artist name to make sure it is clear what the magazine is called.

I changed the font to make it easier to read but still may need to be changed to make it even clearer. I have also added pictures to the top of the page to give an insight on what is yet to come in the magazine, this will also show my ict skills for the magazine. I made the magazines title clearer to read by doing the same on the front cover; changing the colours and outlining it.

I haven't changed much on my double page spread but i leveled out the pictures and moved the quote across so the speech bubbles are able to stay on the page and not be cut off.

PROGRESS

Whilst making changes to my magazine i have recieved verbal feedback. I will have to change my font in order for the magazine to been easier to read.

PROGRESS

Today i made a few changes on my front cover and contents page. I have changed the font colour of magazine title to make it easier to read and sorted out the text on my contents page to make it clearer.