I have changed the coverlines with the artists's name to make sure the artists names do not look like the title of the magazine. I have also made the font bigger so it's easier to read. I also made the title of the maazine bigger to make it stand out against the rest of the magazine.
I am going to change my contents page picture due to the fact that contents pages are meant to be easy to read and the picture may influence this,
I changed the contents page image to this one, so it is subtle and easier to read for the audience.
I then swapped the images from the double page spread and contents page.
I think the main focus must be on looking at the font for your coverlines on the front page- the text on the left takes up a lot of space for one story so use shapes to display text and the masthead needs to be bigger. The same applies to the text and font choice on the contents- could you use colour at all of maybe subheadings? Double page articles must have columns of EQUAL width.
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